Your privacy is important, which is why we’ve put up a skeleton privacy policy for your feedback and revisions before we send it off to be translated into legalese that no one ever reads. Now is the time to point out anything missing or not addressed and have a real effect on the final product.
Privacy Points
Akismet 
Missing…
o We will not pass on any information about you or your blog to any third party except as part of anonymised statistics
o We will not pass the contents of comments submitted on to third parties under any circumstances
“Your comments will never be published by Akismet” invites suspicion. How about “Your comments will never be published by Akismet or passed on to anyone else”
We will not sell the commenter’s (The person who comments) email address to any third party and or to send unsolicted email to that person.